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SleepyHollow, inK.'s avatar

Ironically I just fixed a typo. One sentence was missing a "to"

Steve Adams's avatar

Fascinating.

Andrew Smith's avatar

What a cool, ambitious idea! Like other very ambitious ideas throughout history, this one had a really cool vision, but obstacles got in the way. This is like a concept art project, like "Hands Across America" where you need an uninterrupted 3000 miles of people holding hands, or like "We Are the World."

Sounds awesome in theory, but practice often gets in the way.

SleepyHollow, inK.'s avatar

yes, and then on the other hand, I also wonder if it's all just part of the incredibly meta master plan... whatever comes of this is part of the ooze of the concept... Now her words are rising up!

Andrew Smith's avatar

Haha!

*Jackson shows up, takes off hoodie

*reveals new face tattoo, just the words:

"4D CHESS"

SleepyHollow, inK.'s avatar

Now that would be something!

Dana's avatar

Skin!!! You should write that story, it seems part of it may be written already

SleepyHollow, inK.'s avatar

I started the minute I stopped reading it for the second time that morning. But knew if I didn't wait a moment it would be too close to hers.

Ramona Grigg's avatar

This is incredible. I can't believe I've never heard of any of this before. Write that story!